Should be in photomanipulation??

Pretty nice. I like the lighting from the orb. I think the rendering of the painted elements below the neck (including the hair falling in the front) could use a bit more work.

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good job
just some shadows or something on her belly it looks a bit flat

Given the similarity to the original, that a large proportion of the original remains (cloth, belt, costume detailing) even though the face and hands are painted over:
http://mizzd-stock.deviantart.com/art/Avalon-Half-Body-pack-58760581
Also, as the background is a screencapture from the game. I feel you should indeed move this to the Photomanipulation section.

That said, The lighting from the orb is handled well, as are the eyes, if you painted those yourself. Unfortunately the elements of her dress and torso that you've painted are to rough and blurry in contrast of the bits you left from the photo, creates inconsistencies.

I think the 'detail' cropped version you have in your DA gallery is better, I'd use just that.

You have done a good job integrating the different elements together. The face is very beautiful! But her breasts looks a bit too flat.
I think it'd fit better under photomanipulation! Although it's really a mixed media artwork.

Nice work!
The abdomen could use more work?
Carlos

Like the detailed work much better. Totally agree with Raphael too, it's so very painted over. I'd try watching the picture and doing it yourself from a blank canvas.

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Im not trying to be funny but she really needs bigger breasts! (Check out Frazetta etc..) Nice rim lighting on the hair.

If we look at an in game Blood elf female at a similar angle:
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i154/nevrast_/WoW/FiremaneCorsairsBE3.jpg
you can see the problem with the breasts is that a. they're too flat and b. the right breast is larger than the left. The blurry highlight that you've used to underline the breasts should be a shadow.